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Created:
07/26 2007
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261
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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Thoughts Of The Lost |
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Used Up |
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Confusion |
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Suicide |
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Deadly Kiss |
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My Last Thought |
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My Love |
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Your Effect |
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Clearing Thoughts |
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My Shell |
Ending It With Ease
You say i have everything i need
Everything to become happy
Yet im missing that one thing
The one thing that would fill my void
The pain grows each day a little more
It rips and tears at my insides
Grabs onto my heart and squeezes
When it lets go i cant move
I sit waiting for the pain
But i dont see why im sad
I have the girl
I have the love
Yet im missing it
Missing the feeling completely
As if i have never had it
Never had that little joy
The joy that could turn it around
With this feeling burning me
I lay down
Waiting for the final blow
The final blow that will end it all
But the waiting gets old
So now i search for other methods to ease the pain
I search for that blade
Search for that one shining bullet
And now that i have the bullet i carve my broken heart into it
Carve it soo deep that not even the heat from shot will ruin it
Now when they find the bullet that killed me they will know the truth
The truth about how it ended
About how the bullet just eased the pain
The pain that came from my broken heart
The heart that never mended
That was never.....complete....
Everything to become happy
Yet im missing that one thing
The one thing that would fill my void
The pain grows each day a little more
It rips and tears at my insides
Grabs onto my heart and squeezes
When it lets go i cant move
I sit waiting for the pain
But i dont see why im sad
I have the girl
I have the love
Yet im missing it
Missing the feeling completely
As if i have never had it
Never had that little joy
The joy that could turn it around
With this feeling burning me
I lay down
Waiting for the final blow
The final blow that will end it all
But the waiting gets old
So now i search for other methods to ease the pain
I search for that blade
Search for that one shining bullet
And now that i have the bullet i carve my broken heart into it
Carve it soo deep that not even the heat from shot will ruin it
Now when they find the bullet that killed me they will know the truth
The truth about how it ended
About how the bullet just eased the pain
The pain that came from my broken heart
The heart that never mended
That was never.....complete....
Please Login to post comments| On September 22nd 2007 mistykinsel Said: |
| great poem, but its sad |
| On August 4th 2007 VolcomGirlSk8 Said: |
| great poem. |
| On August 3rd 2007 phhs2010marie Said: |
| sheesh I'm such an emotional lil baby. it made me cry. but yeah I liked it. very dark. my sorta poem. |
| On July 30th 2007 TinaWilly Said: |
| this is a great poem. you really have to pay attention to it. good job. much love, me. |
| On July 27th 2007 bobwobbly Said: |
| I still have that mexican- taco goodness in my mouth. I'm literally drooling. tasty stuff. |
| On July 27th 2007 FruitPunch15 Said: |
| i like it alot but its so sad |
| On July 27th 2007 trishyooofishy Said: |
| its rlly stong. ur an amazing writer |
| On July 27th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| I like the way you kinda "unfold" this one. Nice job! |
| On July 26th 2007 babygap44 Said: |
| hey sexi i usally dont read poems but i read this one i loved it!!! lol:) |
| On July 26th 2007 MightyKristina Said: |
| I liked it a lot. It's very powerful. You're a good writer. Tell me if you post up anymore please. =] |
| On July 26th 2007 xxsarah18xx Said: |
| wow i love this poem.*took my breath away* i lluurvee it:):) |
| On July 26th 2007 hhjjsa Said: |
| aww thats sad but its really good its deep i love it.
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| On July 26th 2007 cjaskot Said: |
| I like this alot =) its very good, and very sad. |
| On July 26th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said: |
| very very good poem. ^.^ its very sad too. and i can really feel the emotion in it. very good job! |
| On July 26th 2007 undiie Said: |
| I hope that spot gets filled....Anyway great poem. I loves it. =] |
