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the innocence of love...Rate this Poem
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Created:
07/14 2007
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209
Category:
Love
My Poems
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14
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Cyan Eyes |
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12
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Silence |
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11
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Thee Red Rose |
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13
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Twenty Thousand Flames |
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12
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Neither Predator Nor Prey |
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10
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Thou Shalt Not Wither Away |
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16
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The Tumble of the Twin Towers |
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14
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Welcome To My Life |
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8
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It's Not Important |
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11
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Bliss |
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10
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Missing You |
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11
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A Moment in Time |
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11
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A Beautiful Sight |
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13
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Pure Emotion |
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9
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Assault Amongst Colors |
Missing You
I miss being around you.
I miss that gleam in your eyes;
I miss the warmth of your touch,
And the way you always catch me by surprise.
I miss the way you make me laugh,
Your kind and gentle face;
But most of all, I miss your caring, loving ways.
I think about you every day,
No matter what I do,
I just can't seem to get my mind off of you.
I'm counting
Off the days until I see you again.
I hope the days fly by;
Because a day without you is just a waste of time.
| On August 11th 2008 Alli684 Said: |
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| I love this. It's really good! |
| On January 12th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said: |
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| I really like it, but felt that the last line was just kind of thrown in there. Other then that, it had excellent floww! It reminds me of the feeling I have when my Marine bf isn't at home. |
| On November 12th 2007 firerocket67 Said: |
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| I love it, and if your talking about Chip, I swear I'm gonna bash his face in for breaking your heart! |
| On July 15th 2007 mazblondie Said: |
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| well written |
| On July 14th 2007 KiaLeahanna55 Said: |
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| its adorable, i love it. |
| On July 14th 2007 cbewing Said: |
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| nice, I like it. |


