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that was a nice time--but too long agoRate this Poem
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Created:
07/06 2007
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196
Category:
Love
My Poems
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14
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Cyan Eyes |
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12
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Silence |
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11
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Thee Red Rose |
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13
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Twenty Thousand Flames |
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12
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Neither Predator Nor Prey |
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10
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Thou Shalt Not Wither Away |
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16
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The Tumble of the Twin Towers |
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14
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Welcome To My Life |
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8
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It's Not Important |
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11
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Bliss |
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10
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Missing You |
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11
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A Moment in Time |
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11
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A Beautiful Sight |
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13
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Pure Emotion |
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9
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Assault Amongst Colors |
Bliss
Your voice is liek the ocean breeze,
Your smile is the sun shining upon the sea,
Your kiss is the warmth of the sun on my skin,
Your touch is the rain falling down upon me.
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Your love is as swift as the river runs,
Your devotion shines bright like the stars,
Your passion is deep like the ocean and sea,
You're always with me wherever you are.
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I love you more than words can say;
I fall for you more evry day.
I have given you all of my heart,
And I'm certain you won't tear it apart.
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I need to be with you now more than ever;
Being around you I feel so much better.
No matter what's wrong,
You always make my troubles fade away.
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I know that you're the one for me;
How much better can happiness be?
| On January 12th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said: |
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| awesome job |
| On July 13th 2007 stics917 Said: |
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| hahaha dude it's cute :] |
| On July 13th 2007 cbewing Said: |
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| Cute, I like this |
| On July 12th 2007 Jeff1315 Said: |
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| Very cute, I like It, but your rhyme scheme seems to change all the way through, hehe, just something i noticed :) But it is great. GJ |
| On July 10th 2007 xxbuggie Said: |
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| I like it. Way killer cute = ] |
| On July 9th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said: |
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| pretty...love at its purest |
| On July 6th 2007 Javellef Said: |
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| It is a wonderful poem. Very sweet words! |
| On July 6th 2007 poet77 Said: |
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| Sorry about the typo, I'd fix it but I don't have enough time to retype the whole thing. |


