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Old poem--I was depressed thenRate this Poem
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Created:
07/06 2007
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159
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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It's Not Important
Tears of sadness
are on my face,
but they are not important,
no one sees me,
no one
in all of the world.
Please Login to post comments| On November 12th 2007 firerocket67 Said: |
| I see you for who you are Barb, don't worry, I'll always be here...unless I'm killed in the Marines, but even in death I'll watch over you. |
| On August 20th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| shortly saddening,, i know the likeness,,, very well written ,, could be a haiku?.. i don't see why to add on to this one,, it seems completed,, a train of thought that has a beginning and an end... it's well written,, somethings are better kept simple and short,, lol,, unless ur like me and ur thoughts just keep on overloading,, -_-~.......... great poem! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On July 20th 2007 MRDRIZ Said: |
| yeah what buggie said that would be a great opening stanza add 2 or 3 more that are as good as that one and this poem would be on fire you are very talented keep it up |
| On July 10th 2007 xxbuggie Said: |
| I think its important. Try make it longer, I think it would make it even better. |
