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thank you poem from hs autobiographical

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Created: 01/16 2008
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Category: Joy

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No Shadows in Sight

A brilliantly lighted room

with no shadows in sight,

painted yellow,

guiding me through the night.

 

The soft, tender carpet on which I tread

caresses my feet, fills this wide and spacious room

allowing a poverty-stricken child to receive his bread.

 

A crack edged its way in,

extending the whole wall's length,

but you gave it a bit of spackle

and a new coat of paint.

 

The door is made of steel

and requires several keys to get in,

but you left a window open

as to let the fresh breeze come within.

 

The room, renovated,

vibrant colors plastered on the wall,

a desert sunset,

not even a single day did you stall.

 

The velvet curtains

hide behind the immense door,

pushed aside to let the sun shine through,

the new foundation, a hard wood floor.

 

Illuminated in the midst of the night

by a rather small skylight,

the constellation takes me away

and the sunset leads me home.

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On January 17th 2008 fallenbloodxxx Said: 
fallenbloodxxx i really love how both the ends of this and.. the other poem that i just read and forgot the name of.. are happy. that's really more than i can say about pretty much almost all of my poems. okay, i myself would relate this to the walls i have built around myself, though i really love my friends, i still barely trust, some judge alot too. its so.. magical how we can get lost just by staring at the sky in general.omg. we should totally do that with people! staring at the sky. learn about them, and THEN say if you like them or not. get lost before saying if we like that place or not. wow. i had a good idea. lol. sorry, i got sidetracked, i really love this, though you did change the rhyme scheme in the last one. i kind of have a problem with critisizing people unless it's really-super terrible in my opinion.
On January 16th 2008 firerocket67 Said: 
firerocket67 Wow...thats touching hun. I really frikkin like it hun. = D