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very straight-forward comments pleaseRate this Poem
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Created:
07/31 2007
Views:
176
Category:
Love
My Poems
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14
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Cyan Eyes |
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12
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Silence |
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11
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Thee Red Rose |
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Twenty Thousand Flames |
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12
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Neither Predator Nor Prey |
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10
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Thou Shalt Not Wither Away |
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The Tumble of the Twin Towers |
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Welcome To My Life |
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It's Not Important |
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Bliss |
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10
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Missing You |
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A Moment in Time |
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A Beautiful Sight |
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Pure Emotion |
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Assault Amongst Colors |
Pure Emotion
When the door shuts
And we’re all alone
In this lovely place
That you call home
My heart skips a beat
I can’t seem to breathe
I can’t wait to feel
Your body next to me
A kiss isn’t a kiss
Without some tongue
It feels wonderful to know
I’m your only one
So lock the door
And push me against the wall
We both smile
As our clothes seem to fall
It’s not the first time
Nor the last,
But it’s magnificent
Nonetheless
And just think,
We haven’t even started anything
| On August 11th 2008 Alli684 Said: |
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| I love this one. It's one of my favorites!!! |
| On August 13th 2007 TheStupiedidot Said: |
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| awww that is such a good poem i really like it lol i cant wait till im able to do that lol only a few more years lol |
| On August 6th 2007 firerocket67 Said: |
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| awesome job! short and very to the point, i love it. amazing rythem, and nice fluid words. awesome job!!!!! |
| On August 6th 2007 Jeff1315 Said: |
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| good job on the rhymes =] i liked it, although the rhythm felt lacking, you also did a great job with the emotions you released =] |
| On August 1st 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
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| awwwwwwwwww,,, wonderful,, u really get out the emotions,,, very superb,,, 'mazing lines and fluidity,,,,,,,, fantastic job!~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |


