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very straight-forward comments please

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Created: 07/31 2007
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Category: Love

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Pure Emotion

When the door shuts

And we’re all alone

In this lovely place

That you call home

 

My heart skips a beat

I can’t seem to breathe

I can’t wait to feel

Your body next to me

 

A kiss isn’t a kiss

Without some tongue

It feels wonderful to know

I’m your only one

 

So lock the door

And push me against the wall

We both smile

As our clothes seem to fall

 

It’s not the first time

Nor the last,

But it’s magnificent

Nonetheless

 

And just think,

We haven’t even started anything

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On August 11th 2008 Alli684 Said: 
Alli684 I love this one. It's one of my favorites!!!
On August 13th 2007 TheStupiedidot Said: 
TheStupiedidot awww that is such a good poem i really like it lol i cant wait till im able to do that lol only a few more years lol
On August 6th 2007 firerocket67 Said: 
firerocket67 awesome job! short and very to the point, i love it. amazing rythem, and nice fluid words. awesome job!!!!!
On August 6th 2007 Jeff1315 Said: 
Jeff1315 good job on the rhymes =] i liked it, although the rhythm felt lacking, you also did a great job with the emotions you released =]
On August 1st 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang awwwwwwwwww,,, wonderful,, u really get out the emotions,,, very superb,,, 'mazing lines and fluidity,,,,,,,, fantastic job!~~~~~~~~~~~Pang