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Created on 3-2-08
you put on your best act and everyone thinks your cool
but to someone who loves you for who you are you just look like a fool.
why can't you be happy with who you are
can't you see that your my star?
you say I'm your everything and you love me so much
then how come were so out of touch.
don't you know your my everything and you don't need to change
and if you do then why are you acting so strange?
someday I hope you know what I mean when I say I love you
but until then I'll be here no matter what you go through.
Please Login to post comments| On October 19th 2008 babyboo312525 Said : | |
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u write really really reallyeally good stuff.... :]] |
| On April 16th 2008 audica Said : | |
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love it, except for it's kinda saying the same thing everyone else is saying. but i liked it... |
| On March 6th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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It's sounds like you are a very good friend. |
| On March 3rd 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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very good lines are a little long but excellent rhyming and great emotion good poem |
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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awww thats really good and full of emotions |
