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I some times feel like my life is fake.Rate this Poem
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fake life.
Always perfect with a smile on her face
everything she does she does with ease and grace
she always uses perfect grammer everywhere she goes
if she's nervous at all it never shows
but underneath that perfect smile and gown
she feels like she's being knocked down
to always have to be perfect and never make a mistake
she feels like her life is completely fake
but she'll go on with life accepting her fate
until the day she dies and then it will be to late.
| On July 25th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is sad but i love it!!! |
| On April 16th 2008 audica Said : | |
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wow, i love it!!! |
| On March 14th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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5***** great poem |
| On March 6th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Perfection is a hard title to live up to. lol No one ever is and that reality can hit hard when it manifests. Nice poem. |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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not bad |


