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If only you could imagine

what's going on inside this head of mine

Let me give you a taste

and watch the pain form and trickle down your innocent smile

 

Be careful.

you could lose yourself in here

and once its found you it digs down deep.

until it feeds off your worries and fears

inside turn into sillhouettes

of unpassioned love.

drowning in the depths of happiness

 

But just try a bite and see how it tastes.

Crying, lusting, loathing were all my affairs,

but when i met depression

it was true love.

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On February 29th 2008 scout777 Said :
scout777 great poem! however i think you should reword this line "and once its found you it digs down deep." something about "once its found you" sounds odd. maybe just say "once it gets ahold of you it digs down deep" or something