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If only you could imagine
what's going on inside this head of mine
Let me give you a taste
and watch the pain form and trickle down your innocent smile
Be careful.
you could lose yourself in here
and once its found you it digs down deep.
until it feeds off your worries and fears
inside turn into sillhouettes
of unpassioned love.
drowning in the depths of happiness
But just try a bite and see how it tastes.
Crying, lusting, loathing were all my affairs,
but when i met depression
it was true love.
| On February 29th 2008 scout777 Said : | |
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great poem! however i think you should reword this line "and once its found you it digs down deep." something about "once its found you" sounds odd. maybe just say "once it gets ahold of you it digs down deep" or something |


