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Altoetry

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Altoetry

By: Justin Trigg

 

 

I’m the alternative to your old way

A new point of view I won’t ask to stay

Maybe it’s love

It could be hate

What is it made of

I won’t stop you’re too damn late

Simple verse by verse in poetry

Love and hate out of bounds tragedy

New found power in a deep hidden strategy

A free form song drifts from my Altoetry

The alternative to your other poem

Thought it up alone at home

Maybe it’s all wrong

It could form a smile

It won’t take to long

There’s a song in your head not in denial

 

No chorus to sing in the poem’s words

By choice alone I reassemble the lines

Change to harmony for these new times

The Altoet takes you to flight like a bird

 

Such a odd way to say the same feeling

With a song at heart when I say how I’m dealing

Maybe it’s not you

This way is me

When you write with what I do

All that’s left is this style I call Altoetry

 

Pretty phrase left with meaning no soul

A broken kite has no journey to make in the sky

The person has yet to leave another mark when they die

Lips and tongue are the first steps of the Altoet roll

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On July 25th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is amazing once again i have read an amazing poem of yours this is awesome!
On June 11th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Brilliant!! 'A broken kite has no journey to make in the sky' ... I would love to know how your mind works.

You are the original and only altoet