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a suicide which he couldn't dealRate this Poem
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Garden Pick
Garden Pick
By: Justin Trigg
What was done to such a soft breeze
She lit a fire out of all that would freeze
No one understood so many ways to cry
I cut a path straight to see that fire in her eye
I don’t think that she could turn around
But she could pull a garden out of a rose
Her tears were left to nurture the ground
I can’t sense her beauty with my nose
She should of held on
But now she is gone
I can never pass the holy rose
Sometimes only she knows
She may of been at fault who really knows
More alive now that her death only shows
Waged a war out of the calmness of peace
No strings attached she still had no release
Turning back I hollowed out her ways
She used to take the clouds out of the sun
I looked back at her better week of days
Realized quickly her devil wasn’t done
She should of held on
But now she is gone
I can never pass the holy rose
Sometimes only she knows
I wish I walked in her garden to find a rose
Trade it all away for the life she should of chose
Never look back now I turn wine back to water
Without her alive makes this choice a lot harder
| On May 13th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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It's a sad one for sure. I do like the phrasing you chose-it almost gave "her" a magical touch. |


