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Sweet Sugarcoat

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Sweet Sugarcoat

By: Justin Trigg

 

Why must I be such a hopeless person

Such a lost cause

And a very invalid version

Do I have to plead to get ahead

Or take a pause

I don’t think the hunger can be fed

A life that’s full of such a sugarcoat

And denial of fact

In every word I seem to of wrote

A strange feeling of so many lost effects

With nothing intact

I see a car crash without one single wreck

Everything gone but remains the un changed

Life in a hole

I can’t escape the solitude and the lack of rearrange

Not a clue of the unknown a wicked melody

A dead soul

Can’t find a reason to exist other than family

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On May 1st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Pretty. ~k~ so (pretty) sounds shallow. I like it though. I have no idea how your loaded with tons of inspiration. *pouts* :)