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Love & Laid
Love & Laid
By: Justin Trigg
I was ready to fall in love
She was ready to get laid
How many more debts haven’t I paid
Is this what the world of hearts is made of
How would you feel if you were only
The one they used to lose innocence
Would you become the raiser of violence
Maybe then you’d know how come I’m lonely
You’d see letters can’t fill the words in dirty talk
I might say the pain of losing makes all others run
You could say the rules of love and laid amount to none
Just about every thought is still her each step in every walk
How about the misery of love and laid
Followed bounds in which you stayed
Wait around for the changing grace
Love and laid, a smile on my face
I was ready to fall even faster
She was ready for the quick lay
All I wanted was to spend all day
I never knew it would end in such disaster
What could you do when you feel the flame
How would you feel if was all put out
Could you see a way not to put yourself in doubt
In love and laid who cares if you even have a name
Nothing is worse then seeing what you’re not believing
None far from ache of a ship sailed off course
Or losing the saddle when you fall off your horse
In the stadium of love and laid the good in you will be leaving
How about the misery of love and laid
Followed bounds in which you stayed
Wait around for the changing grace
Love and laid, a smile on my face
| On April 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I adore the clever wording in this one~ Love and Laid... hmm~ you'd think it'd be all opposite. I always figured us girls more emotionally promiscuous. I think the whole sex matter is over rated :) Love this one lots. sad how you're the love one when she aims opposite though. |
| On April 16th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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great poem..love it. |


