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Love & Laid

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Love & Laid

By: Justin Trigg

 

I was ready to fall in love

She was ready to get laid

How many more debts haven’t I paid

Is this what the world of hearts is made of

How would you feel if you were only

The one they used to lose innocence

Would you become the raiser of violence

Maybe then you’d know how come I’m lonely

You’d see letters can’t fill the words in dirty talk

I might say the pain of losing makes all others run

You could say the rules of love and laid amount to none

Just about every thought is still her each step in every walk

How about the misery of love and laid

Followed bounds in which you stayed

Wait around for the changing grace

Love and laid, a smile on my face

 

I was ready to fall even faster

She was ready for the quick lay

All I wanted was to spend all day

I never knew it would end in such disaster

What could you do when you feel the flame

How would you feel if was all put out

Could you see a way not to put yourself in doubt

In love and laid who cares if you even have a name

Nothing is worse then seeing what you’re not believing

None far from ache of a ship sailed off course

Or losing the saddle when you fall off your horse

In the stadium of love and laid the good in you will be leaving

How about the misery of love and laid

Followed bounds in which you stayed

Wait around for the changing grace

Love and laid, a smile on my face

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On April 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I adore the clever wording in this one~ Love and Laid... hmm~ you'd think it'd be all opposite. I always figured us girls more emotionally promiscuous. I think the whole sex matter is over rated :) Love this one lots. sad how you're the love one when she aims opposite though.
On April 16th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 great poem..love it.