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Ring Bearer
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Created on 4-12-08
Ring Bearer
By: Justin Trigg
All confused don’t know how to give
Settle with the down and learn how to live
Bare what the ring stores
Can’t ask for much more
You can’t get unless you learn how to receive
You can’t pass the test unless you can start to believe
Take to heart you could of lost
Spared no expense for the highest cost
Hope that trust can remain secure in the hour ahead
Pray all is not so calm when you lay yourself to bed
Goal to reach is reaching for the goal
The chance to fill in every hole
Ask not what divides but the divides you can crumble
For every step the one beyond is a risk to stumble
Taking blame is strength for mind
Taking a name is rare and hard to find
Please Login to post comments| On April 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love this. It's refreshing. Grungey~ matches your style. |
| On April 12th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said : | |
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love it, it was strong enough to stand without the rhymes, which is rare!! great job!! |
