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R.I.P skyla carpenter |
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R.I.P skyla carpenter
June 23,2006
I was in such a mix
My best friend died
and I cried
Lightning struck her house
It was faster then a mouse
I was so sad
I even got mad
Why did she have to go
I miss her so
[her name is Skyla she was only 14]
| On December 8th 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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it is good, but it could use a little work, maybe on the rythym, but overall, I liked it |
| On November 24th 2007 mackenzie3893 Said : | |
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i loved it.it was short but it was brillant.im sorrry about you friend.i lost my bestfriend in 2003.and like the person already said it will eventually get easier over time.i also lost another good friend this year in june. so it has gotten easier but it did take time.i used to cry all the time and i was very depressed but i know he is in a better place they both are and im sure ur friend is to.my thought and prayers are with you!
Mackenzie |
| On September 21st 2006 PennieO Said : | |
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Hey,
I loved your poem!
Skyla and Hunter were my niece and nephew, I miss them both so much and I'm sorry that their baby sister was lost along with them. I know that it's hard to understand why this happened and I know that you are in pain over the loss of your best friend. I lost my best friend 3 years ago and I still miss her. All I can tell you is that it get easier over time. We will never forget them and the effect that they had in our lives and we are much better people for knowing them. |


