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Created on 1-12-08
- Depression has covered me.
- like a blanket over my head.
- i feel so confused.
- unsure.
- sad.
- hurt.
- angry.
- weak.
- worthless.
- all of these emotinos throbs inside.
- keeping me awake at night.
- and sleepy in the morning.
- i've been feeling stressed out.
- disqusted.
- sick.
- unhappy.
- grossed out.
- no longer can i walk in a straight line.
- wobbly from side to side.
- i feel like can't talk to that someone.
- but i want to.
- very badely.
- i need to tell them.
- want to get my point across.
- but fear holds me back.
- hesitence.
- they need to know.
- i want to talk.
- but i can't bring myself to.
- i keep it all inside instead.
- it burns a hole in my heart.
- a scar has been made.
- my words. my feelings.
- it all needs to come out.
- but i don't want to breakdown everytime.
- i don't want to fight with him either.
- those things just make my depression increase
- and more exhausted i become.
- crying does the same
- i wish this would all go away.
- become better.
- i don't enjoy being cranky.
- i dont like this feeling of a black rain cloud over my head.
- the boy i love isn't helping me at all. neither of them.
- not comforting me and helping me through this.
- but playing around and watching me fall helplessly to the ground instead.
- disqustion and annoyance i feel toward him.
- doesn't he understand?
- does he even care?
it's like he's giving up on me. - the more i think about it the deeper i sink into an endless pit of raged emotions.
- i don't feel like me.
- i just want it all to disappear.
- want it to be like it used to be...
- when me and him were friends and everything was different.
- everything.
Please Login to post comments| On January 21st 2008 jessnumber3 Said : | |
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i like this its real different and creative |
| On January 12th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Wow this a rather touching poem, I can relate to some of this, well done! |
| On January 12th 2008 pinkslip300 Said : | |
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~this poem i made only 4 my sis, nicole (not real sis) cuz i love her a lot and i know wat shes going through. thatz another reason why i wrote this. after she told me everythign i decided 2 write somthin special and i made this. i hope u like it sis and everyone else. itz special. and the person im talkin bout int he beinning is her dad. shes talkin bout her dad then she talkz about her ex-boyfriend.
i understand what u mean bout ur dad sis. i really do.
love you!!!!
♥
J3ss!~
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