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made 4 my so called mom & dad. >:\Rate this Poem
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Alive |
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12
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unknown |
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14
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Chained |
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Forever |
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Sinner |
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Never Again |
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Proven}{Sin |
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~How You Make Me Feel~ |
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Key Holder* |
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Piece that wont fit inthe Puzzle of Life |
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You Got It Wrong |
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'Tis the End |
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{NightmareFantasy} |
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*Everytime You're Near\\ |
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//Angered_Prey// |
//Angered_Prey//
So much anger built inside
Like a bomb ready to explode
Tears stream down my face
From all these mixed emotions
Ready to pounce when needed
While pain ached my beaten heart
Thoughts so terrible fill my mind
When amiss nothing can touch me
So i force those thoughts away
For i know i can achieve much more
With those hatred filled eyes and this tear streaked face
What must i do to stop the hurt?
The one thing that haunts me awake and asleep
Why must i go through this
Excructiating pain when i alone have not done revenge?
To keep all this caged anger inside
Is to form a cold, known suicide
Because i know there are ones who
Love me for who i was made
But others seek hunting for prey like me
A lightened flame burns within me
Bigger and bigger the fire grows
'Til i'm a bed of flames
Eruptured i've become
Unstoppable and broken
Worn down i am now
To mistify and flow with the wind,
Would be the ultimate wish
For a wish is true,
When a miracle blooms
And when that miracle blossums
No longer shall you have a face
Streaked with tears
Nor a heart beaten to nothing
Gone will the thoughts of hurtfulness go
And the flame within you
For that one wish a miracle has been created
Where you will breathe the air once more
Because the hunters have now been hunted....
And the prey free tonight
| On June 21st 2008 brosbestfrien1 Said : | |
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this is good and it's okay to express ur emotions the only time I write poetry is when I'm upset I truly like this one and I have not been on in long time cuzz I've been going to the hospital alot sorry I have not been reading much |
| On May 10th 2008 pinkslip300 Said : | |
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this is the poem that won 18th place out of 3000 ppl in a poetry contest && is now published in a book!! yaaa
lol |
| On May 10th 2008 pinkslip300 Said : | |
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ok. i was mad. lol
oopz |
| On January 12th 2008 pinkslip300 Said : | |
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~i was really pissed off the night i made this and it expresses all the shitty feelingz i have 4 both of them. they dont understand me and i know they never will. cuz the "control" me and "dont care bout what i think"
grrr. direct quotes from the parents. whoo! NOT.
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{p.s. dad. poetry helpz me and i know u dont give a **** but thatz ur problem. and mom. i know u love ur son. but do u got anyroom for me? guess i know now. >:|
J3ss!~ |


