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Created on 6-28-08
I know she’s not an angel but she brought me to heaven
And that heaven is hell without her
I know that in life we live and in life we suffer
And that all of this pain just makes us tougher
But I’m tired of fighting
And I’m tired hurting
I’m dieing inside
Is there a different wording?
Please Login to post comments| On June 28th 2008 heavenangel93 Said : | |
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revised* |
| On June 28th 2008 heavenangel93 Said : | |
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This doesn't need to be revived. It tells a strong story just the way it is. |
| On June 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Frist line didn't quite join the poem. It did but I wish it rymed. Middle of the poem was really really good. The last line threw me off totally. I think you should revive this poem it would be awesome!!! |
