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Those Porn Stars
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Created on 6-6-08
It's a simple motion the drive to the finish
The loud music, the fast cars
the hardcore drugs, the porn stars
Living up to an image never took so much
Arrogance and ignorance just to feel the rush
Willing minds corrupted
Our freedom has been banned
Economies crumble no one understands
Please Login to post comments| On June 19th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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I agree with these eight lines |
| On June 16th 2008 ralicia Said : | |
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very good. You choose interesting topics to write about. |
| On June 16th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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i definitely think you could add more to it like that other person said, because it starts out really strong. i like how your words pack a punch! |
| On June 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Actually I think this should be longer. It's ok not my favorite. (Not just because what it's about either.) |
