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Fade To Black
Fade To Black
Hurting now I regret
I wish that we’d never met
Just wait now that’s not true
Even though she can’t love you
It’s all dead and it’s far gone
I try so hard to just move on
It hurts bad I love her so
More then she’ll ever know
She’s in your heart that’s what they say
But she was in my arms the other day
I do my best to carry on
I miss her now that she is gone
It’s not like me to tread on the past
But hell it’s not like me to sit on my ass
Memories fade to black
Wishing I could have her back
| On June 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Oh the name of a Metallica song! lol The ryming is a little off. Right on these lines
"It’s all dead and it’s far gone
I try so hard to just move on
It hurts bad I love her so
More then she’ll ever know." The rest of it is preety good. :)
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| On June 6th 2008 petersonsv Said : | |
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wrote this a couple weeks ago
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