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The Revolution of Change

Views (90) Fear Created on 4-12-08 Flag

Oh I see a world so shallow, so meek

A place where being different means that you're a freak

Oh I see a world set on fire

call my ambition my desire

 

A desire for change

A difference in thought

With the wars we've fought 

You'd think we'd learn

 

but it's seems the value of life is not a concern

We should not call our planet ... Earth 

It's should have been named Pleasure

For truly we do not live for the land

 

mother nature is something man

simply cannot understand  

We live for Pleasure, we live for lust

Our human egos are not something you should trust

 

So I say to you the ones so afraid of change 

Your Ignorance bliss but not for long

Your eyes will open

Or they will close 

 

So I say to our pleasure bound planet

 

endeavor 

 

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On July 29th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess Very good job I like that way you put it..
On June 16th 2008 kjoy428 Said :
kjoy428 wow! you have a lot of talent! this is really good! i really enjoy reading your poetry!
On May 18th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop by the way, I bookmarked this. :) don't delete please
On May 18th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop "...endeavor." i have good tingles from my toes to my brain. this is beautiful.
On April 12th 2008 jstuck61 Said :
jstuck61 Thats great =]. I liked it alot
On April 12th 2008 petersonsv Said :
petersonsv endeavor 1417, lit. "in duty," from phrase put (oneself) in dever "make it one's duty" (a partial translation of O.Fr. mettre en deveir "put in duty"), from O.Fr. dever "duty," from L. debere "to owe."
On April 12th 2008 petersonsv Said :
petersonsv To attempt (fulfillment of a responsibility or an obligation, for example) by employment or expenditure of effort
On April 12th 2008 petersonsv Said :
petersonsv Endeavor A conscientious or concerted effort toward an end; an earnest attempt.
On April 12th 2008 petersonsv Said :
petersonsv Endeavor means to try, to attempt