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Sordid Happenings

Views (257) Tragedy Created on 4-13-07 Flag

How i'd loved her, oh yes

How i'd loved her...

She was the breeze in my sail

the apple of my eye!

 

Oh how she's gone from me!

How she left me here to die!

OH CHRIST GOD WHY have you

Allowed her to leave me so?

 

The self-righteous Cry aloud

in the night without pity for my own

ashes as they glitter down

and crash within these streets -

 

- in line with buildings, and cars,

and homeless and bars

not one of these whores compares

to thee, my love eternal!

 

the secrets i keep about your death

will haunt me to mine own

and when that day shall come i laugh --

and keep on!  i will as bones!

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On September 30th 2007 peterserpent Said :
peterserpent i wish people didn't like this one. it is the only one of my poems which is complete bullshit. as previously stated: This poem is to make fun of poets who are overly dramatic and overly emotive. it's ridiculous.
On September 18th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said :
SoulRevival18 WOW! this one is my favorite of all your poems. great job and i'm glad you like my stuff too. thanks.
On July 26th 2007 queenofwarsaw Said :
queenofwarsaw oooo. very nice..
On July 22nd 2007 worldlywise261 Said :
worldlywise261 wow lovely =]
On June 23rd 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 nice as usual
On June 22nd 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk where did all the penis go?
On June 22nd 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz COOL POEM!!
On May 15th 2007 angh2006 Said :
angh2006 so nice...nice work
On May 3rd 2007 nrh654321 Said :
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hey man it is good to see somone who actually knows how to write some good shit
On May 2nd 2007 publixrebelkev Said :
publixrebelkev NICE
On May 2nd 2007 yummyyumcandy Said :
yummyyumcandy this is my fav its good deep!
On May 2nd 2007 peterserpent Said :
peterserpent whats funny is when i wrote this i was totally trying to make fun of Edgar Allen Poe.. rofl
On May 2nd 2007 dark013angel Said :
dark013angel wow...surprisingly...you have talent...lol i like it alot
On May 1st 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 I like nice work
On April 30th 2007 pink23fairie Said :
pink23fairie wow that's awesome!