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poem 9251308 |
Fighting These Urges
beauty is in the eye of the victim.
i want to rub garlic in my eyes.
smoldering black ash rubble.
watering, glistening, stale.
sewage and rose petals.
breakfast soup.
a lime in a corona.
beauty is in the eye of the victim.
| On August 21st 2007 peterserpent Said : | |
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beauty is in the eye of the victim -- because i looked, i now would have rather rubbed garlic in my eyes. |
| On August 21st 2007 peterserpent Said : | |
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no, beauty doesn't exist in imperfection to me. The point of this is to say that nobody is beautiful, and that anyone who falls for "beauty" is in all actuality a victim. Not to mention that uglies think other uglies can be beautiful. It's all the same distorted uptake process anyways. It's disgusting. |
| On August 9th 2007 autrydennis Said : | |
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nice , very good lol!!!!!!, you blowed this ones brains out dogg. |
| On August 3rd 2007 marlana79 Said : | |
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exactly. Beauty exists in imperfection. I agree. |
| On July 22nd 2007 peterserpent Said : | |
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an otherwise beautiful woman -- ruined by her own inclinations etc. |
| On July 22nd 2007 peterserpent Said : | |
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well, this one is about how ugly people are. like.. beauty is not in the eye of the beholder these days... the beholder has become a victim of the trashy new look of pop culture and slutty bitches as well as gangsta thug ugliness. there's so much more... but caked on eye makeup and tattoos helped inspire this one for sure. |
| On July 1st 2007 bonita1510 Said : | |
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wow this is really good i really like this poem u should really check mine out sumtime |
| On June 23rd 2007 october1015 Said : | |
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lol. I don't kno wat 2say. it was great |
| On June 19th 2007 e2bella Said : | |
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Pretty good but I don't get it completely. Your the victim and so (because all of the "i want to rub garlic in my eyes...") outside beauty isn't all you see? Or am I wrong. |
| On May 2nd 2007 publixrebelkev Said : | |
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SO TRUE ARE THESE WORDS |
| On May 2nd 2007 yummyyumcandy Said : | |
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ok corona is discusting bud weiser but i like this one besides that i mean that in a good way! |
| On April 30th 2007 amurrin Said : | |
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this is...like a train wreck. all fucked up but so very interesting. =) and i mean that in a nice way. |
| On April 17th 2007 spasm01 Said : | |
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cool,but very odd. i mean its a bit abstract. |
| On April 10th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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I like this one the best |
| On April 10th 2007 500nets Said : | |
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i love it all except the corona, corona is piss |


