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I heard a whisper

Views (62) Tragedy Created on 3-8-07 Flag

I heard a whisper,
on the wind,
a promise of a better day
and I followed.

My gun metal black rifle,
my new found friend...
as my ole friends lay slain

My shattered vision
for a better way
a more peaceful dat

I heard a wisper, 
 and it went away...
 leading me to battle
 and a crimson decay

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On May 1st 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx really good
On March 8th 2007 Darkrisky Said :
Darkrisky good. it brings a lot of images to mind. i like it!
On March 8th 2007 MyLilRae Said :
MyLilRae I like this a lot. Fix the typos and it'll flow better. Keep up the great work!