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I am Sorry, Mrs. Gunterman |
I heard a whisper
I heard a whisper,
on the wind,
a promise of a better day
and I followed.
My gun metal black rifle,
my new found friend...
as my ole friends lay slain
My shattered vision
for a better way
a more peaceful dat
I heard a wisper,
and it went away...
leading me to battle
and a crimson decay
| On May 1st 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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really good |
| On March 8th 2007 Darkrisky Said : | |
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good. it brings a lot of images to mind. i like it! |
| On March 8th 2007 MyLilRae Said : | |
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I like this a lot. Fix the typos and it'll flow better. Keep up the great work! |


