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Only Gone (Lyric) |
Only Gone (Lyric)
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Created on 6-27-08
[verse one]
There isn’t a way
to bring back
the danger I took on
to fix things, my mistakes
I lied to you when I
said I wasn’t leaving
but it was because I wanted you
to stay what you were
to be what you will
[chorus]
so take this last letter
and tear it to pieces
you shouldn’t have a way
to remember me
I already lost you
the day that we met
so throw the memories
of me into the wind
because I never was,
never was the one for you
[verse two]
I thought I could do this
fight the odds and stall for time
just for a long moment
just to be with you forever
but that didn’t happen
I should have known
this time we had together
it never should have been
[break]
because the sky cries for you
(cries for you)
because my heart dies for you
(dies for you)
everything is now
the way it should be
There isn’t a way
to bring back
the danger I took on
to fix things, my mistakes
I lied to you when I
said I wasn’t leaving
but it was because I wanted you
to stay what you were
to be what you will
[chorus]
so take this last letter
and tear it to pieces
you shouldn’t have a way
to remember me
I already lost you
the day that we met
so throw the memories
of me into the wind
because I never was,
never was the one for you
[verse two]
I thought I could do this
fight the odds and stall for time
just for a long moment
just to be with you forever
but that didn’t happen
I should have known
this time we had together
it never should have been
[break]
because the sky cries for you
(cries for you)
because my heart dies for you
(dies for you)
everything is now
the way it should be
Please Login to post comments| On July 4th 2008 palmtrees16 Said : | |
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love the last three lines. very well written |
| On July 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I love this song. This is deeply beautiful song that you can sing through this. I love it a lot. |
| On July 2nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i like this. good poem. or song rather. nice |
| On July 1st 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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woahhh, i'd love to hear you singing this. wonderfully written hun |
| On June 28th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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yay! i love everything about it...And you are a great writer yourself...very well written too. |
| On June 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Verse one is my favorite! Cool I liked it! :) |
| On June 27th 2008 EJade42 Said : | |
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Yay! :) |
