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Reverie
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Created on 5-16-08
What were you thinking,
dreaming the reality that dreams shouldn't be?
Yet, here you are, quiet voice in my tranquil mind
repeating this beautiful reverie
my unseeing eyes drinking in this wondrous sight.
Please Login to post comments| On June 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This is real peaceful. I like it! :) |
| On May 23rd 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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You did a great job and for 5 lines it says a lot, and enough :-) Keep writing! |
| On May 19th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Awesome... I love the last line :P |
| On May 16th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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wow this was extemely short. yay for me lol, no but really, it was quite nice especially for a short one |
| On May 16th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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wonderful......... |
