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falling for you
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Created on 2-26-07
I know im scared out of my mind,
but in you is the courage i want to find,
so i walk to the ledge, ready to leap,
but as i walk i trip over my feet,
and as i fall out of the plane i start to cry,
cuz i realize that im about to die,
because my chute wont open,
and i fall through the air just hopin,
that someone will hear my voice,
cuz i hate that i dont have a choice,
bout the fact that im falling for you,
yes im falling for you, its true.
So before i impact you should know,
that the truth is i loved you so
i took the leap, i tried to fly,
but the sad truth is, im about to die,
because my chute wont open,
and i fall through the air just hopin,
that someone will hear my voice,
cuz i hate that i dont have a choice,
bout the fact that im falling for you,
yes im falling for you, falling, falling
splat.
but in you is the courage i want to find,
so i walk to the ledge, ready to leap,
but as i walk i trip over my feet,
and as i fall out of the plane i start to cry,
cuz i realize that im about to die,
because my chute wont open,
and i fall through the air just hopin,
that someone will hear my voice,
cuz i hate that i dont have a choice,
bout the fact that im falling for you,
yes im falling for you, its true.
So before i impact you should know,
that the truth is i loved you so
i took the leap, i tried to fly,
but the sad truth is, im about to die,
because my chute wont open,
and i fall through the air just hopin,
that someone will hear my voice,
cuz i hate that i dont have a choice,
bout the fact that im falling for you,
yes im falling for you, falling, falling
splat.
Please Login to post comments| On December 13th 2007 bridgewatera Said : | |
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wow that is amazing. i love it. great job!!! |
| On September 14th 2007 Brittanybb13 Said : | |
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This Poem should be a song....U know what I'm going 2 try that with my Guitar....U Should Write More..Ur good at this... |
| On July 22nd 2007 meandyouislove Said : | |
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omg wow that was good
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| On May 31st 2007 thee1phantom Said : | |
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this is amazing |
| On May 31st 2007 jewells716 Said : | |
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oh wow..... i love this. i wish i could write like that. |
| On May 7th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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If you read this poem as a metaphor it is amazing! Dunno if that's how you intended it. |
| On April 2nd 2007 101091 Said : | |
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... wow |
