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Jesus Christ saved my life |
Jesus Christ saved my life
While in this war we call life,
this battle we all must fight,
on my knees, due to the endless strife,
lost in the dark, looking up, i saw the light.
When i thought my life was about to end,
due to the bludgeoning onslaught of satan,
lacking the strength to myself defend,
did appear a tall and handsome man.
He had not beauty in bones and skin,
but in the way he cared enough
to die for me and all those who sin.
To realize who he was, it was not tough;
he had scars in his hand, a whole in his side.
I knew he loved me, I knew he cared,
and in that moment, all my fears did subside.
No longer lost, no longer scared,
I arose, and with all my might,
feeling strong, picked up my sword,
and did resume the rigorous fight
against the relentless horde.
And when it all came to an end,
I did find myself alive and well.
My life, successfully, did I defend.
For I had withstood the minions of hell
And coming upon the gates above,
having payed quite a price
to feel my saviors love,
I did see the one and only Christ.
He smiled, stretched forth his arm
and pulled me into a warm embrace.
I felt safe, and free from harm;
and dwelt forever, in that sacred place.
this battle we all must fight,
on my knees, due to the endless strife,
lost in the dark, looking up, i saw the light.
When i thought my life was about to end,
due to the bludgeoning onslaught of satan,
lacking the strength to myself defend,
did appear a tall and handsome man.
He had not beauty in bones and skin,
but in the way he cared enough
to die for me and all those who sin.
To realize who he was, it was not tough;
he had scars in his hand, a whole in his side.
I knew he loved me, I knew he cared,
and in that moment, all my fears did subside.
No longer lost, no longer scared,
I arose, and with all my might,
feeling strong, picked up my sword,
and did resume the rigorous fight
against the relentless horde.
And when it all came to an end,
I did find myself alive and well.
My life, successfully, did I defend.
For I had withstood the minions of hell
And coming upon the gates above,
having payed quite a price
to feel my saviors love,
I did see the one and only Christ.
He smiled, stretched forth his arm
and pulled me into a warm embrace.
I felt safe, and free from harm;
and dwelt forever, in that sacred place.
| On April 18th 2008 Tigga16 Said : | |
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Well written and every line was beautiful. Thank yu so much for sharing! |
| On March 23rd 2008 happymaddie09 Said : | |
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love it im a christian too and i love God |
| On February 16th 2008 ninjas91 Said : | |
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that is such a wonderful poem... see people like you should be writting more poetry like this... then that dark pain stuff.. you know what i mean... people really should come to know Jesus Christ... he didnt just die for me and you he died for all those atheists and nonbelievers out there in the world!! He is such a good God... and God of second chances.... thank you soooo much for sharing that heart felt poem of the fight of a christian!!!! it is the best poem on this website!!!!! GOOD JOB!!!! |
| On January 31st 2008 piggywiggy2 Said : | |
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beautiful
sorry |
| On January 31st 2008 piggywiggy2 Said : | |
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That is butiful
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| On January 14th 2008 LuvFaithHope Said : | |
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Beautiful |
| On December 22nd 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Awesome! |
| On December 19th 2007 oxXxlovelyxXxo Said : | |
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This brought tears to my eyes. This is wonderful! |
| On December 19th 2007 blessjahne Said : | |
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW... God bless you... thanks for sharing this poem to us... it's very nice.. |
| On December 18th 2007 TheBranster Said : | |
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yayyy! Jesus my favorite super hero, lovely poem |
| On December 18th 2007 Gigglez200969 Said : | |
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wow this is really good i love it!Great Job! |
| On December 17th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. Amazing. You have such a way with words. I absolutely love it. |
| On December 17th 2007 Tigga16 Said : | |
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That was amazing! I haven't read a poem so good in a while. This gave me goosebumps. Thank you so much for sharing. |
| On December 17th 2007 stics917 Said : | |
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wow i love this dude |
| On December 17th 2007 pattymoss1977 Said : | |
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very good |
| On December 17th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Lovely. Thanks for sharing the experience. |
| On December 17th 2007 killXmeXcutie Said : | |
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beautiful.... |
| On December 17th 2007 jrsbaby20 Said : | |
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i feel the same way...nice job...very touching |
| On December 17th 2007 assumetheworst Said : | |
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awsome job! :D :D :D |
| On December 17th 2007 DinosaurGurl Said : | |
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good |
| On December 17th 2007 Bzgurlmark Said : | |
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this is SO good!!!!......='-) *crying*
thank you so much 4 this!!! |


