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Too Good for You
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Created on 3-31-07
Dripping words, silent fears,
Slowly growing, bringing tears,
To the surface of my mind,
If you think that I’ll be fine,
Think again and blindly grind,
My heart into a bloody mess.
With your clothes, so white and clean.
I’m blinded by your ‘holiness’.
I’m leaking now, my problems spreading,
On your clothes, my blood is letting.
I’ve stained you with my ugliness.
And you’re just angry in distress.
Please Login to post comments| On July 3rd 2007 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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Very nice one can interpret it many ways, I particularly see it as if you were talking to God, but like I said it's very nice. |
| On April 1st 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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wow. thats really well written, you're good. |
| On April 1st 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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i still like this, you're way better at poetry than i am :) |
