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Waivering Faith
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Created on 2-16-07
I look to you,
My heart cries out
I want to come
To be with you again
Like it used to be.
But it seems I can’t
The words won’t form
They’re trapped inside
The longing grows
I think I’ll burst
If I don’t release
This thing in me.
But then
The service ends.
This feeling is buried
Once again.
Deep within my heart.
Perhaps one day
I’ll let it out
And come to you again.
But until then
I look away
I can’t bear to see your face
The tears within your eyes.
Please Login to post comments| On October 28th 2007 brittnee86 Said : | |
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I don't know what this is about, but to me it made me think of how I sometimes feel about God... wanting to go to him, but somehow still refusing to. Wanting to feel that unwaivering faith that I had as a child... but somehow turning away from it. Filled with doubt. I liked... and I love how a person can write a poem and set it out into the world for others to find meaning in it. In the end, it doesn't really matter what the poet had in mind... only what the reader gets out of it. Thanks. :) |
| On July 7th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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such a burden you carry! Such pain! you make my heart ache with your heart breaking poems! |
| On April 1st 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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its really good, but can you explain it to me, sorry D= |
| On March 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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i like this poem, but i don't know if i like the ending as much as your others. very good though :) |
| On February 17th 2007 xinxthexdarkx Said : | |
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I really like this poem. |
