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Created on 2-10-07
Spinning through a dark abyss,
I’m swirling down,
Not hard to miss,
In the blinking of an eye,
Blood’s dripping down,
But please don't cry.
It’s the way it has to be,
In sinking down,
I'll be set free.
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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wow. so deep. so full of pain... |
| On July 3rd 2007 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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????? That is quite an imagery. Well written. |
| On March 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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short but to the point like the one below said, very good |
| On February 25th 2007 ViolenceFetish Said : | |
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This is pretty cool. Short but gets its point across |
