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This is how I feel every day.Rate this Poem
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Accepted |
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Fallen |
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Key |
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Breaking |
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In a Moment |
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Alone in the Dark |
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Suicide |
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Final Release |
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Addiction |
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Waivering Faith |
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Too Good for You |
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Silent Confessions |
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I love you |
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Gone |
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Alone in the Dark
I miss your smile.
The smirk you give,
right after trying
to get a rise out of me.
I miss your eyes.
The way they look
strait into mine
and hold my gaze.
Beautiful blue,
light, but intense.
I miss your hands.
Big and strong,
clasped in mine,
fingers intertwined.
Knowing you’re close to me.
I miss your lips.
Pressed against mine,
just you and me.
Alone,
lost in the wonder of the moment.
I miss the feel.
Of your body next to mine,
pressed up against me.
Lying beside me.
Right behind me.
I miss the feel of your breath,
hot next to my ear.
The sound of your voice,
telling me you love me,
as you hold me tight.
I miss your arms,
the way they surround me,
and fill me with a sense of safety.
I miss sitting next to you in your truck,
talking about the day,
what went wrong,
and what went right.
I miss walking with you,
hand in hand, eating ice cream,
and for the moment,
not caring about tomorrow.
I miss you more and more each day.
And I find myself wishing
I was with you.
| On August 5th 2008 zfreak Said : | |
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Just reading this poem has taken me to another place..keep up the great work! |
| On July 7th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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Thank you. You have reminded me of all that I take for granted. |
| On April 26th 2007 Tarararararaaa Said : | |
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i love this! you might like my latest photoshop piece "see the truth" i may be wrong, check it out and let me know what you think. Tara xxx |
| On April 1st 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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or* |
| On April 1st 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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aw. thats sad. so they are apart bc of distance, of break up? its really good. your a good poet! |
| On March 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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that's really good, so sad |
| On February 25th 2007 ViolenceFetish Said : | |
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Once again, i likes it :D |
| On February 17th 2007 DiggityDave Said : | |
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Maybe he left you because you are ugly.. |
| On February 11th 2007 sexybabylove Said : | |
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ahh that is a very good poem |


