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In a Moment
I miss you so much.
The feeling when I first wake up.
I think of you and smile,
Then a sense of sadness overcomes me
As a realize today will be yet another day
In which you’re absent.
I go through the motions of life,
Class, studying, work.
But all seems worthless
Without you beside me.
I count the hours until a familiar ring
Graces my ears.
I hear your voice,
It makes me smile.
And hope tomorrow.
Won’t take as long as today.
(I wrote this in about five minutes, so feel free to critique .)
| On July 7th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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I think it is a really good start to what could be another wonderful poem! |
| On April 1st 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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5 minute poems...lol, something ppl like us masterd, haha jk. anyway, i really like this its cute. and makes me happy for you =D |
| On March 26th 2007 Raiden21 Said : | |
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i agree with nessa.it holds alot of meaning and it's beautiful |
| On March 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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it sounds great for just 5 minutes, a few parts that seem somewhat out of place but nothing big really |
| On March 4th 2007 kadygrl222 Said : | |
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its really beautiful. and quite amazing for 5 minutes. love it! |
| On February 25th 2007 ViolenceFetish Said : | |
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I like it. Kinda sounds like where i'm at at the moment lol |
| On February 7th 2007 nessatwix Said : | |
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i like it. its short and sweet but still holds meaning. |


