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In a Moment

Views (170) Love Created on 1-30-07 Flag

I miss you so much.

The feeling when I first wake up.

I think of you and smile,

Then a sense of sadness overcomes me

As a realize today will be yet another day

In which you’re absent.

 

I go through the motions of life,

Class, studying, work.

But all seems worthless

Without you beside me.

 

I count the hours until a familiar ring

Graces my ears.

I hear your voice,

It makes me smile.

And hope tomorrow.

Won’t take as long as today.

 

(I wrote this in about five minutes, so feel free to critique .)

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On July 7th 2007 brokenwing3 Said :
brokenwing3 I think it is a really good start to what could be another wonderful poem!
On April 1st 2007 knowlyfe Said :
knowlyfe 5 minute poems...lol, something ppl like us masterd, haha jk. anyway, i really like this its cute. and makes me happy for you =D
On March 26th 2007 Raiden21 Said :
Raiden21 i agree with nessa.it holds alot of meaning and it's beautiful
On March 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx it sounds great for just 5 minutes, a few parts that seem somewhat out of place but nothing big really
On March 4th 2007 kadygrl222 Said :
kadygrl222 its really beautiful. and quite amazing for 5 minutes. love it!
On February 25th 2007 ViolenceFetish Said :
ViolenceFetish I like it. Kinda sounds like where i'm at at the moment lol
On February 7th 2007 nessatwix Said :
nessatwix i like it. its short and sweet but still holds meaning.