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Breaking
I hear the words,
But can’t believe,
I want to speak,
How could you leave?
I think about,
The times we’ve shared,
And all the days
You said you cared.
The others said,
It’d soon be through,
I never thought,
That you would too.
Why can’t you see,
Can’t you believe,
That when you’re here,
My soul is free.
You think that I’ll
Be better off,
But just you wait,
And please don’t scoff.
I’ll take this knife,
Put to my skin.
And slowly drain,
This life within.
My flesh is pale,
My body’s cold.
It’s how I speak,
My thoughts untold.
I’ve proved them wrong,
So please don’t cry.
This is the day,
That I will die.
And now that I know,
You’ll soon be gone,
I free my blood,
And wait for dawn.
| On September 29th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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very well put together |
| On July 7th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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I really hate "cutting" poems because to cut yourself dose not help heal your heart...but in this case I have to make an exception. very well written! |
| On April 1st 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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wow. thats amazing. i like it a lot! its cute in a not cute way, you kno? |
| On March 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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that's exactly how i feel when my boyfriend threatens certain things, it's amazing how you describe this. very good :D |
| On March 2nd 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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this is beautiful, and it really hits home for me. Keep it up, you have a gift. |
| On February 7th 2007 matabooa Said : | |
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what is the dawn? |
| On January 29th 2007 LokiSeto Said : | |
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Interesting... and yet the ending is abit quick. And the proving wrong thing seems kinda outta place. |
| On January 29th 2007 CHICKA6789 Said : | |
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I almost did that. I know how you how you feel there again. |


