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The fear of love unrequited...Rate this Poem
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Created on 1-12-07
I clutch the rope
I feel the grooves of age,
Rough beneath my palms.
I hang midair.
My only support,
In the rope.
I see you reach out.
Beckoning me.
You hold out your hand.
You promise to catch me.
I shy back in fear.
I know the rope,
It’s comfortable.
But I feel my grip weakening,
I give you my hand.
You clasp mine in yours,
And pull me to safety.
Suddenly,
You let go.
The rope gone,
I fall.
My worst fear confirmed.
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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your description is vived, your meaning is deep. I feel a connection |
| On March 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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wow, i like this a lot, sad ending :) it's good |
| On February 7th 2007 matabooa Said : | |
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to which direction do you aim this peice to love or to faith in some higher being ? |
| On January 29th 2007 LokiSeto Said : | |
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To leave safety and risk it all on love and then fail... nice work. |
| On January 29th 2007 CHICKA6789 Said : | |
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I like this alot. I feel what your saying. |
