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Created on 9-25-07
Slipping slowly through my brain,
Silent thoughts of silent pain.
Always screaming in my head,
Makes me wish that I were dead.
Wild and crazy, barely breathing,
Mind is racing, heart is beating.
So unraveled, can’t control.
This silent spinning in my soul.
Inside is chaos, filled with mayhem.
But outwardly a sea of calm
Smiling face, happy stance,
Just please don’t take a second glance.
You might see through my thin façade,
And find that I am truly odd.
Two fighting factions deep within,
Hard to tell, which one will win.
The trying tumbling storm beneath,
Or the calm exterior, my protective sheath.
Please Login to post comments| On January 9th 2008 ofloveandblood Said : | |
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This was brilliant! I can connect with it on so many levels that it's kind of haunting. Terrific job! |
| On October 28th 2007 brittnee86 Said : | |
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Beautiful. I love the tone here... and the choppy syntax. Really gives it a feeling all it's own. :) |
| On September 29th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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I really do like this one best out of all your work. Great job. |
| On September 26th 2007 Emylinda Said : | |
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flows very nicely. |
