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On The Spot..

Views (61) Worry Created on 5-12-08 Flag

 I open my eyes, and see the morning light.

Here I am. 

On the spot..

Forced to give out my best.

With words unspoken, I can tell you a story.

Look in my eyes, and see the depth within.

I need someone to save me,

I'm drowning in the sea of angst.

Don't change my words to support your own sexual needs.

Yo no estoy jugando contigo.

I am not playing with you.

Y tu espera un reaccion de mi..

And you expect a reaction from me.

Como si yo deber de decir algo.

Like I'm gonna say something,

Lo que nunca va a recibir.

Which you're never gonna get.

Here's a poem :

Feelings change, but I never will.

Like the currents in the sea, you push and you pull me.

Uncharted waters,

Discovering new emotions.

This may sound corny but :

My heart is a ship.

And you are the captain.

BLEH. Weell...

I'm tired of you.

And your consistency in inconsistency.

I shut my eyes, and close them tight.

And hope to get some sleep at night.

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On May 19th 2008 Sloanly Said :
Sloanly i loved it! :D
On May 17th 2008 FallonsPhotos Said :
FallonsPhotos Wonderful poem!
On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia I want you to know im so moved by this poem.very nice.
On May 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 this is how i described erica...i would say you're (meaning her) was consistantly inconsistant...it's like u somehow had records of my aim away messages. lol this was original and great...and proves how good of a poet u are. I bow in the presence of greatness and dare not to look in ur eyes. i'm just not worthy.
On May 12th 2008 Chula252 Said :
Chula252 WOW I have been having so many issues lately with people taking my words out of context, assuming the right to a assume how, who, and what I am, simply to suite their own purposes and needs ... this just reconfirms so much of how I have been feeling of late. You are awesome I am so glad you have found an outlet through written expression. Another powerful write!!!
On May 12th 2008 october1015 Said :
october1015 Haha, I put the meaning beneath it..
On May 12th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet yikes...too bad i dont know that much spanish, but this was good (what i could read lol)