Created By
Author's Comments
(idk what it is.making it on the spot)Rate this Poem
|
+
15
|
There are times. |
|
+
12
|
On The Spot.. |
|
+
7
|
I don't belong here. |
On The Spot..
I open my eyes, and see the morning light.
Here I am.
On the spot..
Forced to give out my best.
With words unspoken, I can tell you a story.
Look in my eyes, and see the depth within.
I need someone to save me,
I'm drowning in the sea of angst.
Don't change my words to support your own sexual needs.
Yo no estoy jugando contigo.
I am not playing with you.
Y tu espera un reaccion de mi..
And you expect a reaction from me.
Como si yo deber de decir algo.
Like I'm gonna say something,
Lo que nunca va a recibir.
Which you're never gonna get.
Here's a poem :
Feelings change, but I never will.
Like the currents in the sea, you push and you pull me.
Uncharted waters,
Discovering new emotions.
This may sound corny but :
My heart is a ship.
And you are the captain.
BLEH. Weell...
I'm tired of you.
And your consistency in inconsistency.
I shut my eyes, and close them tight.
And hope to get some sleep at night.
| On May 19th 2008 Sloanly Said : | |
|
|
i loved it! :D |
| On May 17th 2008 FallonsPhotos Said : | |
|
|
Wonderful poem! |
| On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
|
|
I want you to know im so moved by this poem.very nice. |
| On May 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
|
|
this is how i described erica...i would say you're (meaning her) was consistantly inconsistant...it's like u somehow had records of my aim away messages. lol this was original and great...and proves how good of a poet u are. I bow in the presence of greatness and dare not to look in ur eyes. i'm just not worthy. |
| On May 12th 2008 Chula252 Said : | |
|
|
WOW I have been having so many issues lately with people taking my words out of context, assuming the right to a assume how, who, and what I am, simply to suite their own purposes and needs ... this just reconfirms so much of how I have been feeling of late. You are awesome I am so glad you have found an outlet through written expression. Another powerful write!!! |
| On May 12th 2008 october1015 Said : | |
|
|
Haha, I put the meaning beneath it.. |
| On May 12th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
|
|
yikes...too bad i dont know that much spanish, but this was good (what i could read lol) |
