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There Three, But They're Not Complete

Views (247) Passion Created on 6-14-07 Flag

Curious oh do - let's wander far. Take me to the road I have before.

How do you like to travel there? How does your sitting stance do it now?

Just is there - we'll go there.

Enjoy it without detours, offroading signs. Airbags. Airbags.

You cannot do - it's impossible with the mentally challenged. That's all you need you need - experience face rubbing alcohol, cotton tips and qballs. Bandage the anxiety pills, swallow 'em oh down.

Someday it won't be the way you think, and will be greater than the dream.

Wash away the afternoon, some observants are quick to notice it's the hopeless and lifeless way. All I can do is laugh - in the way I enjoy.

So slowly create the word, so..so..dig up the space. Crawl into it & yell! THIS IS THE WISH! Why are you yelling?

With the intention to feel trust - all appreciation hasn't been learnt. Resting the chair - it needs its rest. Sooth around - go so north. Pack it all in, go out with ya to our place. Bow up to you - I'll bend down but I got a broken back, from laying on my lazy ass.

Go inside and cover.

This is all plastic - you figuratively made bastards! Bigger! Faker! Rubbilier. Rooby. What just happened?

Plastic toy sets. I'm not here, you can't see me. Invisible idiot. Making conversation to you, with thoughts.

Sunken ship noise - overturn the imagination.

Soon you will your will to end these times you regret, the bad, the nghts, the doubht, and everything that keeps you from smiling. Second-hand guess the worst, assume to a wrong. Hole the way, it's all them and you. Their to owns. Relate to the sky.

As I begin to think of you, could you - be - alright - without saying a thing? As we lay - with out day - and our - love. Oh silence - do you - admit - it is - beautiful? As we look - into - us - our silence - has - grown. Are you alright? Here we are. I hope you enjoy it. I should create a you - so we can we.

Walk the sky - it is our ground. Every star a welcome mat, don't step on any planes. You don't want their blood on your shoes.

 Wait until I go into my zone - before taking off. Sing me to sleep with your lullabys about boring events - then start and end your days & nights before I wake up.

Melody, my me right now, you're mine for this short while. All the us that was. Relive it for me. Re-experienced for you. Take away the bad. I could feel you last night - and on that night alone.

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On September 8th 2007 danielftlew Said :
danielftlew I didn't like it at first... but then I read it outloud.. and it all made sense. Funny, how simply slowing down to recite something outload can breach into further understanding. I'd say it's a definite post-modern purple haze of internal insight and reflection.
On August 6th 2007 corinne004 Said :
corinne004 Such creativity. One of the poems I'd like to read over and over.
On August 5th 2007 kjoy428 Said :
kjoy428 wow! that's awesome!!!!! i loved it!
On August 5th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx confusing....and just to annoy u...i loved it!!!
On August 3rd 2007 goodgurl8504 Said :
goodgurl8504 I think maybe you're a reincarnated Kerouac... That's what your poetry does to me... Phenomenal!
On August 3rd 2007 AlexINTJ Said :
AlexINTJ This must have taken a really long time to write. The level of creativity is phenomenal!! I'm really impressed. In an odd sort of way it made sense. You should be really proud of it. And what were you doing when you thought of this? Quite curious. Anyway, great job!