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Make-up and television-trails led me.

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Deeply Shallow

Views (235) Passion Created on 3-5-07 Flag

Thinken in and broughten down,

spending a time loving your smile.

It is now my duty to compliment you,

I'll travel through a kiss to win your dedication.

 

Falling asleep,

 is he still expecting.

 Worth a worth plus fifteen,

   expired sourcream.

 
Holding on for another turn superficial,

wait again with her four faux's and foes.

Pick up the swallows and paperthin,

never deep aneath the surface.

 

Falling asleep,

 is he still expecting.

 Worth a worth plus fifteen,

   expired sourcream.

     Misguided lovings,

        grand it's a right thing.

          I hate cliche rhyming,

            especially in poetry.
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On July 22nd 2008 chordettesbich Said :
chordettesbich thumbs up from me also
On October 11th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said :
XxEMOxBITCHxX i like it=) its much different than most of the stuff i normally see=) It is very awsome and i shall give it a thumbs up =)