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Madd Apple Pie

Views (92) Other Created on 2-27-08 Flag
  1.  She's holding warmth loving,
  2.  upon her face.
  3.  We once were the only ones,
  4.  within a dream.
  5.  Now she has drifted..
  6.  To the corners of distance.
  7.  Within she remains
  8.  a sweet, delicate girl.


 She spoke with soft wisdom, hidden familiarity and melting lingers as her glowing, crooning red-silk hair matted and dangled aimlessly long against her unarmed, lowered relaxed shoulders.
 Sweet apple pie to savour, this one.
 With thin-wrapped, softly wound, tightly epped and sereneful pink-red lips teased and pleased a slight, amused edging around rest of the smooth, lavishing filled-round face.
 Upon looking up, her smile shone a bright illumination of tranquil 'n ecstasy from her eyes in a perfect combination of grace, lostness, lofted embassies of framed beauty and complete sense of whole.
 Taking her soft, gentle breezed hand - we flew to the skies and have not returned to perceptive reality since.
 Lost inside this beautiful, mad, and weird exciting cave.
 Painted pictures, walls, entrance, memories floating effortlessly on the twinkling, swooned blue swirls of fantasy memoirs mimicking small ponds.
 Wakes and wings expand driftly by, swaying for some Madd Apple Pie.

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On April 6th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth I love this, my jakey. You have not for a moment stopped amazing me.
On February 28th 2008 surefirefailur Said :
surefirefailur You crate a whole new world with this one. Very immersive.
On February 28th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
wonderful
On February 27th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb I agree, extremely brilliant, you have a creative mind and tend to use it well, keep it up with the good work!
On February 27th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Such luscious delineations. I enjoyed every delectable word!
Scrumptious!!!
On February 27th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 That was very imaginative, but extremely brilliant, definitely different than anything else I have read on here, but then again, so are you
On February 27th 2008 gahmmmblah Said :
gahmmmblah two thumbs up =)