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There's Only One and Only Of the Truth

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 Once thought this could only be a dream
 (never had I known how much I wanted)
 that would've never came to be.

 Once thought this could only remain
 (never had I known when you'd arrive)
 as something others could see as fake.

 Once thought this could never happen
 (never had I known what you'd bring)
 when all the hopes seemed abandoned.

 Look into my eyes and see how you are cherished
 (lost inside their pools of delight and joy)
 for anything that I've waited awhile of.

 Look into your eyes and see how I am trusted
 (lost inside their whirls of life and truth)
 with everything that your fears have to bear.

 Looking into our eyes and we are all we see
 (lost inside the existence of another like we)
 as the final love we have wanted has arrived.

 Now hope my dearest warmth in your embrace
 (some shadows linger near)
 tightly wrapped around an entire touch.

 Now would you breathe against my soft lips
 (as the air inhales dear)
 caressed, bitten and seeking more.

 Now hold my head far against your breast
 (heave the comfortable light-felt sigh)
 with closed eyes and a relaxing wonder. 

 As your heart holds the only hand I'd like to love
 (never knowing the true depths of this)
 through every day and every night in you.

 As my being shares itself entirely in your trust
 (the most sincere gift I could hand)
 and receiving your eternal grace in return.

 As you're looking down into my eyes as I'm
 (bringing me further into amazement and beauty)
 losing myself while we drift to another life.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 And the only thing I want right now is you and me.
 I have no idea whom you are, where you're coming from,
 and until that day comes, you'll always be a close dream.
 Just a close dream.

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On February 29th 2008 amackey1988 Said :
amackey1988 Seems to have sexual undertones masked by the overtone of a love tone...Idk about beautiful. Raunchy more like it. Good use of language and the parenthetical portions add a nice effect.
On February 29th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Indeed beautiful, breathtaking poem. Well done!!!
On February 28th 2008 surefirefailur Said :
surefirefailur I don't like this poem. But don't worry. It's well written and i like the parentheses thing. I just hate, hate HATE love and romance and all that whatnot. That was not melodramatic. That was true.
On February 28th 2008 SophieLynn00 Said :
SophieLynn00 nubbbs you crazy bitch.. its absoult beautif
On February 28th 2008 AlexINTJ Said :
AlexINTJ Although its not my favorite subject, your writing made it worthwhile. Very nice. :)
On February 28th 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :
smlesarahsmile Cute... but most love poems have a cheesy quality to me :(
On February 27th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I like that you’re experimental in your writing styles. Even the fall to the last lines created a dramatic finish. Like dreaming your falling and just waking up in the nick of time before you go SPLAT.
On February 27th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Love the sincerity in this one, never do we know our own true wishes, lest they appear in a dream
On February 27th 2008 gahmmmblah Said :
gahmmmblah Someday your going to make someone a very very happy person
On February 27th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 wow this is truely amazing! Nice job!
On February 27th 2008 goodgurl8504 Said :
goodgurl8504 lovely
On February 27th 2008 lilprincess122 Said :
lilprincess122 i LOVE it =)
On February 27th 2008 llamangos4eva Said :
llamangos4eva Amazing. I love it. I mean... this is by far one of the best poems I've read of yours. Keep up the work Jake^_^
On February 27th 2008 MaddieIsWeird Said :
MaddieIsWeird =] Aww. That was beauiful, Jake. =]] Very very Beautiful.
On February 27th 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 you are truely amazing!!
On February 27th 2008 individulsong Said :
individulsong beautiful.
On February 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord if only your dream could be your reallity, this would be my wish to you. Nicely written.