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Love Your Man

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 Close the curtains let the hail bring, let the snow fall damp the only ring around tiny little fingers organized and made to think it'll be held onto for years to come.

 If I were to say to you, that I love everything you do, what would you response? Come into my Kingdom of existence.

 Walking through the day with someone without a single say, would you like to come in and sip the drink to free your pace? Free your pace, c'mon and free your state.

 'cause we won't last long enough to say...

 THAT WE'RE ON OUR WAY.

 Well she writes in her mind, and she writes in her own words of how she'd like to leave. She'd like to break free of her chains.
 He walks the streets, thinking the same thing. The only trouble herein lies, they're both chained inside their minds. They're both troubled inside their minds.

 I see her standing there, smiling, as she looks my way and turns me on.

 If any love, wants to be enough.

 You'd get high.

 You'd get high.

 You'd get high.

 Wishing week, said the dreams to the ever expanding being walking through their mind. Trapped are they? Write a suggestion and mail it to the suggestive collateral in exchange for walking to every eye you greet.

 Missing the eightieth memory of the Eldest wise-man. 

  Easy as I love you and I walk through confusion to an repeating instance of pushing back and fourth in the downtown tri-state area. Meeting the faces, walking into the places where the artists gather to shun the normies of the Eastern world.

 Dimly-lit bar with smoke-filled air containing marijuana and cigarettes as four poets smoke out of a Hookah to feel alright. I walk up to the bar and order Southern Comfort twist with Schmirnoff on the rocks. My friend's reciting her poetry to the quiet audience clapping a fine beat to her melodic rhymes.

 Well I got into town about an hour ago. Took a look around to see which way the wind blows. With a little girl in the BarHaven bungalow. Is she looking like a lady in the city of lights, or just another lost angel in the city of night? 

 What is their to challenge when you've climbed the mountain Kerouac spoke of as Ray Smith, Ray Smith the poet, the intelligent narrative writer to teach our forgotten, ignorant, blind and boring children to leave their computers, leave their radios and television and a - do something with their lives. You are never alive until you've tasted the fear of death. Death makes angels of us all into the garden we've tried to keep away. Keep away, I will not go. Prefer a feast of acceptance to the group of asylum directors. 

 They're coming to take me away soon, from the place I've been made to love. She needs to walk away this instant. We need someone who doesn't need we. She stared me in the eyes and I stood a Jane Doe caught in the headlights of the back of a blue bus ready to take a ride on the snake to unconsciousness.

 I'm eternally true and faithful to you until you walk away and I cannot see you anymore. 

 And I am wandering wandering through hopeless night in meager food for souls forgot, I tell you: Is life depressing to the depressed angst-filled...Crying....SUICIDAL..MISERABLE PEOPLE..OF EAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARTH!

Or is it?

Is it but a question made up by the endless symphonies of music industries raping the ears of children? A quick buck for quick fuck, lest be known until you are bought into capitalism!

 So will you wake up?
Will you stare?
Will you put on your pants and shirt?
Change your undergarments.
Will you wake up?
Will you smile?
Will you frown?
Will I even see.

 The final audition is tonight, I will not even arrive. 

 I will not even arrive.

 Mark my calendar as another day passes us by.

 Record events and play it to my grandchildren.

 "Please come home. We need more of you in this world. Please, come home." 

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On April 6th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth I love your words.
On February 28th 2008 surefirefailur Said :
surefirefailur This one is great at conveying emotions. It is alos funny at some points. It didn't make any sense, but I got it. (if that makes any sense)
On February 28th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
very impresive. check out some of mine and let me know what you think.
On February 27th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Wow, I'm IMPRESSED with this poem, purely genius, you deserve to be in the top for Testriffic poems, in fact even more then that, your work shall be known throughout the world. Consider your abilities to write and what to do with it all in the future if you haven't already.
On February 27th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I won’t even pretend that I grasp the eccentricities of this creation and yet also ponder if your idea was meant to be nonspecific and more left up to the interpretation of the reader. Whatever the method to your madness be, it is always a pleasure to watch your mind unraveling the depths of your thoughts in such bizarre and beautiful poetry.
On February 27th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very lyrical, even though there is no set rythym to the words. Loved the message, definitely something to think about, that is what I love about your poems, they are very thought provoking, and make you actually think about what is being said.
On February 27th 2008 gahmmmblah Said :
gahmmmblah What your trying to convey in this poem, is great. I'm really amazed that one person can write so beautifully.
On February 17th 2008 Chula252 Said :
Chula252 Breathtaking!!!! ... The great ones always break the rules, they create as opposed to conform ie. Cummings. Ahhhh Mr. Numbz you never cease to amaze me with your genius :). Always a pleasure.
On February 17th 2008 llamangos4eva Said :
llamangos4eva Deffenently out of the norm of the poetry I'm used to. There was no beat to it, no rhythem whatsoever. However, I like the words that flow in these lines. The emotion, stressed, confused, hopelessly in love, are stronger than any poem I've read by-far. Kudos to you in your abilities with this one.