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My Poems
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Love Revolves |
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My Secrets |
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In the End |
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The Love |
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Complicated Business |
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The Fights |
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I Love You |
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An Unknown Friend |
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The Friends that Mean the Most |
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Love is Strong |
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The Vampire Love |
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The Love Not Free |
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Deadly Love at Last |
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Desolate Soul |
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I Die Inside |
Hollywood Movie
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Created on 12-4-07
Someone looking at me,
someone with a gun,
and crying young.
Now take a closer look,
he looks the same,
same as me.
My last chance,
I punch him fast,
to my hand, blood.
His body breaking,
into little shardes,
like my life!
A bullet in my skull,
then falling fast,
understand at last.
Who is this guy,
other then a reflection,
of me?
I then hear "CUT,"
and I stand up,
walk off the set!
It's just the movie,
that's what they think,
for now!
I get home again,
pull my gun out,
and play my part once more!
But this time now,
seen one is real,
dig the grave!
someone with a gun,
and crying young.
Now take a closer look,
he looks the same,
same as me.
My last chance,
I punch him fast,
to my hand, blood.
His body breaking,
into little shardes,
like my life!
A bullet in my skull,
then falling fast,
understand at last.
Who is this guy,
other then a reflection,
of me?
I then hear "CUT,"
and I stand up,
walk off the set!
It's just the movie,
that's what they think,
for now!
I get home again,
pull my gun out,
and play my part once more!
But this time now,
seen one is real,
dig the grave!
Please Login to post comments| On December 23rd 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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i agree with them both |
| On December 5th 2007 alienz13 Said : | |
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this is a good poem Nick |
| On December 4th 2007 kjoy428 Said : | |
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wow......thats so sad...but as a poem, incredible!!!!! |
