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Teenager
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Created on 11-15-07
I look up from the sky,
I am blinded not from the sun,
but blinded from my thoughts.
My thoughts from the last year on,
from all the pain,
and all the fear.
I am pulling the string.
Like pulling a sweater apart,
I am pulling myself apart.
If you could see my feelings,
feel my pain,
you would see a person.
Not a normal person,
but a broken teen.
Not like the mainstreem teen,
but a teen in the deepest depression,
and in need of help beyond what I can get.
I am broken into shards.
Like broken glass,
my shards can't be fixed.
I feel alone and hopeless,
and I know I am helpless.
How did I end up this way?
How am I still alive?
I wish I knew the answers,
or maybe I don't.
I am blinded not from the sun,
but blinded from my thoughts.
My thoughts from the last year on,
from all the pain,
and all the fear.
I am pulling the string.
Like pulling a sweater apart,
I am pulling myself apart.
If you could see my feelings,
feel my pain,
you would see a person.
Not a normal person,
but a broken teen.
Not like the mainstreem teen,
but a teen in the deepest depression,
and in need of help beyond what I can get.
I am broken into shards.
Like broken glass,
my shards can't be fixed.
I feel alone and hopeless,
and I know I am helpless.
How did I end up this way?
How am I still alive?
I wish I knew the answers,
or maybe I don't.
Please Login to post comments| On November 17th 2007 kjoy428 Said : | |
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wow nick, this is amazing. i'm speechless. not only is it a great poem, but its soo....real. i'm glad you found a way to put this all into words. |
| On November 15th 2007 Willtreme Said : | |
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It seems as if you believe the problems and pains as are described in your poem is unfixible. While I do not know you, or what you may have gone through, being bleak will just make it all the worse |
