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Deadly Love at Last
feeling the senses fading
i can no longer feel the rain of acids hit my face
worried that life is all ending
worried others are out to take my place
cant feel my hands and my eyes are drowned by blood
my face so numb that it burns
suddenly love i realize that love is fake
and that love loses more than it earns
fingers turning purple
and the light seems to feel far
and the thought that your love is a disaster
seems to kill my heart wherever you are
choking on my own blood
fingers as hard as stone
thinking of how i let my guard down for you
and about all the love that was never shown
eyes completely black now
and i cant hear a sound
dwelling in the lies you told me
and the suprises that i found
as i take my last breath
remember that i once did care
and the reason that your killing me right now
was that my love you couldnt bare
i can no longer feel the rain of acids hit my face
worried that life is all ending
worried others are out to take my place
cant feel my hands and my eyes are drowned by blood
my face so numb that it burns
suddenly love i realize that love is fake
and that love loses more than it earns
fingers turning purple
and the light seems to feel far
and the thought that your love is a disaster
seems to kill my heart wherever you are
choking on my own blood
fingers as hard as stone
thinking of how i let my guard down for you
and about all the love that was never shown
eyes completely black now
and i cant hear a sound
dwelling in the lies you told me
and the suprises that i found
as i take my last breath
remember that i once did care
and the reason that your killing me right now
was that my love you couldnt bare
| On September 12th 2007 kjoy428 Said : | |
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wow! this one is amazing too! you are such a great writer! these are absolutely incredible! |


