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The Love Not Free
Hey you,
It’s about time for me to be true. I have never been truly humble.
Cuz I am afraid that my heart will crumble. I miss our love that we used to share. It reminds me of the fact that at one time you really did care. I only wish you were here now. So I may ask “what happened to my soul mate, where did you go, and how?” What was once our burning, blazing fire of passion is now a dying ember. How it could be relit if our love you would just remember. What made you choose my heart to dismember? Turn my soul from a beautiful day in spring into a shadowing day in December. I haven’t been the same since you left me. I can’t focus enough to do anything. Have you gone on and found someone new? Someone disapproving, hateful, and deceitful jut like you? I know that was harsh and not in need. But I have plenty of it built up and ready to bleed. Why did you have to rap me up in a love perplexity? Why did you cast on me this poison bound hex I see? All I did was love you and you turn around and damage my precious mind. Wasn’t there a man without strong emotion for you to find? All I ask is that you quit rising my desire. For you to finally put out the last bit of our elapsing fire. End the agony of this love that brings on trepidation. Release all this built up feeling of consternation. I want to move on without you coming back and reminding me of what’s over and done. I want to look forward to the new and what has barely begun. I wish to say goodbye and you need to say goodbye to me.
Best wishes,
The love not free.
It’s about time for me to be true. I have never been truly humble.
Cuz I am afraid that my heart will crumble. I miss our love that we used to share. It reminds me of the fact that at one time you really did care. I only wish you were here now. So I may ask “what happened to my soul mate, where did you go, and how?” What was once our burning, blazing fire of passion is now a dying ember. How it could be relit if our love you would just remember. What made you choose my heart to dismember? Turn my soul from a beautiful day in spring into a shadowing day in December. I haven’t been the same since you left me. I can’t focus enough to do anything. Have you gone on and found someone new? Someone disapproving, hateful, and deceitful jut like you? I know that was harsh and not in need. But I have plenty of it built up and ready to bleed. Why did you have to rap me up in a love perplexity? Why did you cast on me this poison bound hex I see? All I did was love you and you turn around and damage my precious mind. Wasn’t there a man without strong emotion for you to find? All I ask is that you quit rising my desire. For you to finally put out the last bit of our elapsing fire. End the agony of this love that brings on trepidation. Release all this built up feeling of consternation. I want to move on without you coming back and reminding me of what’s over and done. I want to look forward to the new and what has barely begun. I wish to say goodbye and you need to say goodbye to me.
Best wishes,
The love not free.
| On November 5th 2007 blargh15 Said : | |
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wow.. |
| On September 12th 2007 kjoy428 Said : | |
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this is amazing! i love it! |


