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Created: 10/02 2007
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Category: Love

My Poems

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Beautiful Diaster
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Hell awaits..
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Five Years Of His Life

Love thy Heart

amongst the walk of broken hearts
some will find the light still of..
those remaining whole pieces and parts
of all that we used to be
of all that killed you and me
the mesh of love and want and loss
the pain of memory
minds pictures tainted with a faded gloss
so we weep
so we keep
intact that what we can
what we can't understand
what we need to let go
keep walking head high
step by step toe to toe
along this walk hand in hand to mend and sow
along this walk the strong survive
along this walk now you and i
slowly we walk the edge of a brilliantly new colored life...
once again to live...for a bigger part....
blessed are we, those who take the loss and STILL
have faith in life of love to love thy heart!

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On October 14th 2007 ausjo Said: 
ausjo I like how it flows with the build to the repitition of 'along this walk' towards the end. Great stuff.
On October 9th 2007 autrydennis Said: 
autrydennis great job , i like it alot ..you are very talented :-)..i love your writing ..keep it up you ..and keep smiling :-)
On October 2nd 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: 
Jeremy062902 I like this, great imagery. It had a rhythmn to it that I liked. Just kinda soft. Very Nice.