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Count Till Ten |
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The One Broken Heart No One Can See. |
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In this room, there lies a girl.. |
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All This Hurt. |
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Heart on my Sleeve. |
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Drunken Love |
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The One Broken Heart No One Can See.
Falling in love is how it's supposed to be.
But there's always this 1 broken heart no one can see.
The girl will say "I love you"
But does the boy say "I love you too?"
They go on; hearts getting played.
The guy only wanting to get the girl laid.
Using fake love as a shield.
Just when will the truth get revealed?
The boy slowly lures her in.
As they say blackmailing is a sin.
He says "If you love me, you'll do this"
And so they slowly start to kiss.
Minutes tick,hours pass by.
Finally done,he confesses; this was all just a lie.
She bursts into tears.
He just leered.
What, you actually thought I loved you?"
I was just using you!"
With that said, he crushed her heart.
She realized she still loved him with a big part.
As she watched him walk away.
She still didn't know what to say.
All she could think was how could he?
I thought he really loved me.
And this was the story of this girl and this boy.
Who to get her in bed had this very sickening ploy.
| On December 30th 2007 heartzcanbleed Said : | |
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..............wow.................has any 1 in 31 read it? its about sharon right?? |
| On November 15th 2007 veronicavanity Said : | |
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Wow.
Wow.
Wow. |
| On November 1st 2007 sabrina225 Said : | |
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REMINDS ME OF A GUY NAMED JOSE....I THINK IMA DEDICATE THIS TO HIM IF YOU DONT MIND....I LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE STUFF LIKE THIS HAPPENS ALOT...AND BEING THE CRAZY GIRLS WE ARE WE LET IT HAPPEN.....KEEP IT UP I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR MORE |
| On October 7th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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ughh this mmakes me mad |
| On October 6th 2007 X4packchickX Said : | |
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that would suck. Good job though! :) |
| On October 5th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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I know this doesn't classify as anger, but I totally forgot to change it. Sorry. |


