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Count Till Ten
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Created on 10-5-07
I watched you walk away.
Telling myself 'This is going to be okay.'
Your words, lingering in the air
Have left me in such despair.
You told me you 'loved' me
Now,I can see that we were never meant to be
Oblivious to the damage you've done.
Just leaves me holding this gun
Against my head,I feel the cold, metal
My heart begins to settle
Closing my eyes and counting to ten
Perhaps you'll see how much I love you then...
Please Login to post comments| On March 6th 2008 Djshadownite Said : | |
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=O awesomenessssss |
| On February 12th 2008 SaveTheSaved3 Said : | |
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holy shit |
| On February 11th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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wow very nice! :) |
| On January 20th 2008 bloodyness6969 Said : | |
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wow.. guns are cold |
| On January 10th 2008 SpiffyKnickers Said : | |
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kinda creepy... it made me shiver! hehe i really like it |
| On November 15th 2007 veronicavanity Said : | |
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Wow!
You're deep.
Emotastic, but I love it. |
| On November 1st 2007 sabrina225 Said : | |
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wow deep...ive been here minus the gun part....very good writen i love it |
| On October 28th 2007 pellagirl933 Said : | |
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WOW...thats really GOOD! |
| On October 7th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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omfg this is extremely good |
| On October 6th 2007 omfg010203 Said : | |
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omg....i really freekin love this |
| On October 6th 2007 X4packchickX Said : | |
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aww, that's cute. :) |
