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Left Alone

Views (50) Haiku Created on 3-14-08 Flag

Left alone,

With broken dreams

And shattered bones.

 

Lost inside,

With empty thoughts

And foolish pride.

 

Down and out,

With fading hope

Im full of doubt.

 

Left alone,

With teary eyes

Im coming home...

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On June 6th 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC GREAT JOB!!! Your poems are really inspiring. PROPS to you man.
On April 29th 2008 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF wow
On April 8th 2008 RealFiction616 Said :
RealFiction616 I love this poem. It's awesome, but I don't think the stanzas are haikus, they need seventeen syllables, but I still think that it's really good.
On April 2nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I love the first part alot. Very nice. I can't do haiku's. I stil love reading them still~
On March 16th 2008 angelaroseowen Said :
my picture
wow very strikin really grabed me! x x
On March 16th 2008 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 wow this is really good. Way to go!! ~Vampyr~
On March 16th 2008 Babydotz Said :
Babydotz I cant think of waht to say! WOW! I'm stunned.. I love this... Have u read my poems... My Hero and He will never know? They remind me of this
On March 15th 2008 California1516 Said :
California1516 u did a really good job with this..its hard to do haiku's
On March 14th 2008 mypoeticrage Said :
mypoeticrage taking a stab at a haiku let me know what you think